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The Night Wisher

Posts: 149

Age: 24
From: Syria

  01.01.2014 at 18:51
Hello everyone,
This is a 2 songs demo, I've recorded creating a project naming it "Detoxicated", I need your opinions about song writing/ performance / mixing and sound.
I've done Guitar/Bass and programmed drums, another guy has done vocals for me, and a solo was done by a friend as a guest solo.
http://detoxicated.bandcamp.com/album/turbulence
Criticism is welcome, thanks.
P.S. incase you liked the music, here's the FB page : www.facebook.com/detoxicated.sy
The Evergreen

Posts: 88

Age: 35
From: USA

  10.02.2014 at 01:18
If it's what you want to play, play it! But you asked for critique, so here goes...

Songwriting: hard to say. I've heard far worse.
Performance: you really seem to know what you are doing, awesome!
Mixing/sound: solo sounded weird but can't put my finger on why. Almost like it was not quite in tune?

Not my cup of tea, but good music. You should be proud of yourself and record more tunes.
Dogmat

Posts: 2
From: Belarus
  18.02.2014 at 09:13
Hi, upload on soundcloud, pls.
theFIST

Posts: 831

Age: 21
From: Austria

  19.02.2014 at 18:39
Snare far too high in the mix
also i"d prefer it if you played a bit faster
other than that quite like it, great start
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Written by Warman on 07.11.2007 at 22:39
Haha, that's like saying "compose your own Metal album and upload it here, instead of writing a review of an album".
Sunioj

Posts: 3887

Age: 26
From: Israel

  02.07.2014 at 13:50
Good production, songwriting is pretty weak though.

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