‹‹ Back to the Musicians corner
Posts: 5  
Users visited: 39  
Search this topic:  

The Night Wisher

Posts: 149

Age: 26
From: Syria

  01.01.2014 at 18:51
Hello everyone,
This is a 2 songs demo, I've recorded creating a project naming it "Detoxicated", I need your opinions about song writing/ performance / mixing and sound.
I've done Guitar/Bass and programmed drums, another guy has done vocals for me, and a solo was done by a friend as a guest solo.
Criticism is welcome, thanks.
P.S. incase you liked the music, here's the FB page : www.facebook.com/detoxicated.sy
The Evergreen

Posts: 220

Age: 37
From: USA

  10.02.2014 at 01:18
If it's what you want to play, play it! But you asked for critique, so here goes...

Songwriting: hard to say. I've heard far worse.
Performance: you really seem to know what you are doing, awesome!
Mixing/sound: solo sounded weird but can't put my finger on why. Almost like it was not quite in tune?

Not my cup of tea, but good music. You should be proud of yourself and record more tunes.

Posts: 2
From: Belarus
  18.02.2014 at 09:13
Hi, upload on soundcloud, pls.

Posts: 904

Age: 24
From: Austria

  19.02.2014 at 18:39
Snare far too high in the mix
also i"d prefer it if you played a bit faster
other than that quite like it, great start
Written by Warman on 07.11.2007 at 22:39
Haha, that's like saying "compose your own Metal album and upload it here, instead of writing a review of an album".

Posts: 3894

Age: 29
From: Israel

  02.07.2014 at 13:50
Good production, songwriting is pretty weak though.

Advertise on Metal Storm

Login or register to post here.

Similar topics

Forum Topic Similarity Started
Lists Old School Death Metal Lives On!! 6 30.07.2012 by Aristarchos
Metal arena Favorite Old School Swedish Death Metal Band Between These 4 6 11.12.2008 by Dangerboner
Lists The @gents Old School Death Metal / Grindcore List 6 18.09.2011 by
Articles Forgotten Gems of Old School Death Metal 6 06.12.2014 by
Lists 20 Underrated Old School Death Metal Classics 6 30.07.2012 by Aristarchos