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Posted by Soliloquy on 17.05.2006 at 03:24
since MS started all overagain, i decidied to get rid of the numbers. but i believe this should have been the 5th poetry thread.

anyways, you guys know the rules. post somethig you wrote, or a friend of yours wrote. or if you dont want to post some poem, you can always read others work and comment on that. unlike the last poetry thread, lets try to comment on every poem we get in.

(if you want me to add or remove something, just PM me, and i'll edit it right away.)



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Bad English
Masterchief

Posts: 44147

Age: 31
From: Sweden

  12.01.2016 at 17:55
We admire the sun, in landscapes we mourn
Cold rivers between us, and frustration between our love
Gray clouds, brought here by solitary wind
And distance between pale moon and bright sun is just an illusion
We told our last goodbyes to world we once knew
As members of anti-summer alliance , between October and March
People won't understand, this passion about ice and snow
As members of anti-winter alliance, between March and October
People won't understand our passion about sun, what never sets here
Sleepy hallows and doorways what you don't need to lock
Empty wounds between us, there is no going back
Falling rain pounding on your side, you're wasted from mud and depression
Just a frozen river here, quiet place, I can walk and be free
Mighty sun , moon, we admire you in old ways
Just an illusion, growing means freedom; I am refusing to do it
We admire the landscapes, where we walk, and will forever dwell
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Karlabos
Weirdo of MS

Posts: 3631

Age: 28
From: Brazil

  08.02.2016 at 20:41
Voting Abuse:

Is it my unconscious reaction to the childhood scars?
Or perhaps affected by the position of the stars?
I am afraid I met feelings one can not explain:
but today I woek with the urge to downvote again...

Metalstorm.net? Never had I heard of this before.
But just once, just this time I am going to log in
it is now my duty to complete the following chore:
write the votes for my favourite bands' discography in.

...I sure am having trouble with my identity
dissimilar profiles help build my online entity
cannot tell if i am johndoe or faveband321
but of all tastes, every personality has the same one...

...Changing email and country: needed technicalities
(for rhyming reasons, "[i]woek[/]" on the fourth line was a typo)
I say I need to hide my multi personalities
because grumpy elders can get a BitCold or psyko

..Downvote! spam the one! All these albums are the worst ever!
I still feel like listening to all their stuff, however!?
Am i compelled to listen to that total disgrace?
Mayhaps it increases assurance of my supreme taste?

...Nobody else has my born gift to evaluate art,
for example when I look at these bands on the top chart,
I rest assured none could begin to compare with band x.
Who said again this binary voting scheme is complex...?

...I do not spot my favourites on the top: an absurd.
This fact bothers me more than I would like to admit
but after giving perfect scores for all albums I heard
I rest peacefully, for I made the world better, a bit
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If you're looking for some 2016 bizarre music, I got some
Bad English
Masterchief

Posts: 44147

Age: 31
From: Sweden

  21.02.2016 at 23:04
Music For A Rainy Summer Day

I bought a ticket to LA, just to see a Sunset strip, January demons, just a glam, cocaine and hookers.
It brought me down just as it did whit many young men back in those days.
Sitting on a rooftop, just wish to fall, windows to my soul are closed.
I just want to run away, run away from this place, back to barn in place I grow up
It is just music for a rainy summer day, what heals your soul.
Paradise is broken, just empty miles to walk, when cigarettes are your friends
Emotions and disappointed heart, it's all what Hollywood is all about
Footstep in Alaska's soil, and they said I will be lost forever
It's just a music for rainy summer day, and you don't need a glam, fortune anymore
I am sitting here alone and looking, just like I will die today
As I did some time ago, when they said I am 18 time to grow up
But I did not, I realize I am only one who survived, refusing be grow up
As many young 80's people left from Skellefteå or Luleå to Stockholm or Göteborg
To find fame and glory, they all died once.
It's just a music for rainy summer day, and 80's summer memories sticks forever
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Zaphod
The Nothingth

Posts: 2317
From: Belgium

  21.02.2016 at 23:22
Written by Karlabos on 08.02.2016 at 20:41

Voting Abuse

That was hilarious.

Yours are probably the only posts worth reading in this thread.
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Wubba Lubba Dub Dub
Bad English
Masterchief

Posts: 44147

Age: 31
From: Sweden

  24.02.2016 at 22:27
Ac/Dc song

I am looser, I am boozer, I am taker, I am faker,
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am wheeler, I am dealer, I am your love stealer
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am chaser, I am racer, I am problem facer
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am rocker, I am fucker, I am natter
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am faker, I am taker, I am dirty job hater
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am flanker, I amn wanker, I am dunker
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am food eater, I am weed dealer, I am balls squeezer
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am a singer, I mugger, I am a old school fucker
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

I am player, I am slayer, I am drummer
I am rock n roll man, as she is imaginary rock n roll woman

World is going to hell, if yiou don't like rock n roll, you will be there as well
Its hells bells. Sex porno, drugs, guns, is what sells .

It is there, don't touch, it is High Voltage
You us brain, its bets information storage.

Baby Please Don't Go, don't go to New Orleans
Don't fuck him tonight, don't fuck Joe Williams.

Its dynamite, its T.N.T.
Bow it up, we all will see it in BBC.

I am hot dude, I am Rock 'N Roll Singer
I am army reject, I still know how to use a stinger.

It's A Long Way To The Top (If You Wanna Rock 'n' Roll)
It's hard fall, if you overdose alcohol.

Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap
Piss of you fucking creep.

I lost my fucking job, because I am a Problem Child
I am young man I am running wild.

All guns blazing, there is Jailbreak
And bomber boys in nam, decide do some airstrike.

Music, women, music, Let There Be Rock
I don't know, seems she wants to suck.

Hell Ain't A Bad Place To Be
But paradise is, because there is no rock n roll show to see.

She was woman, her name is Whole Lotta Rosie
She dating that drummer, his name is cozy.

I demand Rock 'n' Roll Damnation
Because I can't het frustration.

If You Want Blood (You've Got It)
Fight back and you hit it.

She's dead she is Back In Black
And cops found a black body sack

Rock And Roll Ain't Noise Pollution
Its way of Darwin's evolution.

For Those About To Rock (We Salute You)
Its not dirty movie, we do not spit on you.

Hey chick there Flick Of The Switch
You know you're a stupid bitch.

Who Made Who
He fucks you.

Blow Up Your Video
But save it in your home studio.

Hey hey I ride it, its Thunderstruck
She has a face like animated duck.

Its The Razor's Edge
We all know how to spell a sledge.

She was a little Ballbreaker
He was a home town trouble maker.

Its our life style, Stiff Upper Lip
He is a private detective, his nick name is dick.

Safe In New York City
I have no money, it's so pity.

I applied to work in NASA, I have a Satellite Blues.
That team, I support them, but they loose.

Black Ice, I ride rock n roll train
Free spice, kills young boys brain.

Rock Or Bust. Make a castle from the send
Fuck of and rust, this is na end.
----
Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Bad English
Masterchief

Posts: 44147

Age: 31
From: Sweden

  08.03.2016 at 23:55
And rainy day fades away

Rainy day fading away and watchers are waiting when grimness comes
Spirits all calling, but we think they are unhappy, tears can whisper to
Upon the hill, moonlight, and wicked past, the headstones are crumbling
And rainy day fades away

Rainy day fading away and ivy carved in old stone
Moonlight and serpent flower, awakes wickedness of sin
And they, lost souls just sitting and playing as time never would exist
And rainy day fades away

Rainy day fading away, they will return, as banker always comes to collect
A hero to someone, but you felt from higher mountains
Broken body, and spirits don't care if in life time you was a zero
And rainy day fades away

Rainy day fades away, its third fool moon, magic is there
One of nine moons, just spirits knows about it
And they has a hands, what can touch the sun
And rainy day fades away

Rainy day fading away, waters of unholy river
Flows and it don't care what name gives to it
Water knows, its undying and only Hades are abow
And rainy day fades away, …as our life
----
Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing

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