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Posted by Soliloquy on 17.05.2006 at 03:24
since MS started all overagain, i decidied to get rid of the numbers. but i believe this should have been the 5th poetry thread.

anyways, you guys know the rules. post somethig you wrote, or a friend of yours wrote. or if you dont want to post some poem, you can always read others work and comment on that. unlike the last poetry thread, lets try to comment on every poem we get in.

(if you want me to add or remove something, just PM me, and i'll edit it right away.)



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Troy Killjoy
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Posts: 18673
From: Canada

  22.12.2013 at 03:35
Did you just write a poem using band names? That's pretty fuckin' clever man.
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Karlabos
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Posts: 1555

Age: 26
From: Brazil

  22.12.2013 at 13:52
Written by Troy Killjoy on 22.12.2013 at 03:35

Did you just write a poem using band names? That's pretty fuckin' clever man.


Thanks. I missed the conjugated verbs and prepositions though. =P Kinda hard to find these on band names.
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Cynic Metalhead
Atrocious Virgin

Posts: 3613

Age: 24
From: India

  22.12.2013 at 16:40
Nice effort Karlabos.
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MechanisT

Posts: 1386

Age: 25
From: Bangladesh

  23.12.2013 at 17:00
Written by Karlabos on 22.12.2013 at 02:23

Forest Of Shadows:
A Million Dead Birds Laughing
Lunatic Gods Unleashed Winds Of Plague
In The Woods...

Dark Angels Raised Fist Without Mercy,
From Nowhere
Rain Fell Within
Scarlet Wings...

Daylight Dies
Upon A Burning Body,
Clinging To The Trees Of A Forest Fire.
Sadistik Forest:
The Foreshadowing Malevolent Creation.

As I Lay Dying
Fates Warning
Voices Of Destiny Deals Death
Before The Dawn...

Whispering Forest:
When Woods Make Graves
Suffocation, Internal Suffering...
Until Death Overtakes Me
Six Feet Under.


Ingenuity. XD
Lit.
Brütal Legend

Posts: 3676

Age: 27
From: USA

  28.12.2013 at 00:13
Written by Karlabos on 22.12.2013 at 02:23

Forest Of Shadows:
A Million Dead Birds Laughing
Lunatic Gods Unleashed Winds Of Plague
In The Woods...

Dark Angels Raised Fist Without Mercy,
From Nowhere
Rain Fell Within
Scarlet Wings...

Daylight Dies
Upon A Burning Body,
Clinging To The Trees Of A Forest Fire.
Sadistik Forest:
The Foreshadowing Malevolent Creation.

As I Lay Dying
Fates Warning
Voices Of Destiny Deals Death
Before The Dawn...

Whispering Forest:
When Woods Make Graves
Suffocation, Internal Suffering...
Until Death Overtakes Me
Six Feet Under.


Sabaton could take a leaf from your book.
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Mercyful_Kate

Posts: 181

Age: 26
From: USA

  06.01.2014 at 02:50
Written by MechanisT on 23.12.2013 at 17:00

Written by Karlabos on 22.12.2013 at 02:23

Forest Of Shadows:
A Million Dead Birds Laughing
Lunatic Gods Unleashed Winds Of Plague
In The Woods...

Dark Angels Raised Fist Without Mercy,
From Nowhere
Rain Fell Within
Scarlet Wings...

Daylight Dies
Upon A Burning Body,
Clinging To The Trees Of A Forest Fire.
Sadistik Forest:
The Foreshadowing Malevolent Creation.

As I Lay Dying
Fates Warning
Voices Of Destiny Deals Death
Before The Dawn...

Whispering Forest:
When Woods Make Graves
Suffocation, Internal Suffering...
Until Death Overtakes Me
Six Feet Under.


Ingenuity. XD

Wow.
Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  06.01.2014 at 03:12
Written by Karlabos on 22.12.2013 at 02:23

Forest Of Shadows:
A Million Dead Birds Laughing
Lunatic Gods Unleashed Winds Of Plague
In The Woods...

Dark Angels Raised Fist Without Mercy,
From Nowhere
Rain Fell Within
Scarlet Wings...

Daylight Dies
Upon A Burning Body,
Clinging To The Trees Of A Forest Fire.
Sadistik Forest:
The Foreshadowing Malevolent Creation.

As I Lay Dying
Fates Warning
Voices Of Destiny Deals Death
Before The Dawn...

Whispering Forest:
When Woods Make Graves
Suffocation, Internal Suffering...
Until Death Overtakes Me
Six Feet Under.


Revened Bizarre has sonmg Godess Of Doom, where are doom bands are listed
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Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Karlabos
<insert title>

Posts: 1555

Age: 26
From: Brazil

  06.01.2014 at 14:58
Written by Bad English on 06.01.2014 at 03:12


Revened Bizarre has sonmg Godess Of Doom, where are doom bands are listed

I don't know... I just didn't think of any doom bands when I made this.
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Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  02.02.2014 at 16:10
She(whit her tears)

Its just a end, end of her
hopes , dreams and everything
in this dark dark road
grey days, grey skies and pale skin
tears frozen on cheek in this cold winter day
She(whit her tears)
wonder alone, come sad place to be
alone, nobody is near, just creeps
dead, heroin overdose, but still live
just she whit her tears
just she whit her fears
just she whit out me, whit out home and love
nobody is coming after, nobody is taking her home
in warm arms of bellowed one,
Its just she (whit her tears)



I cross the rivers of no return
navigation is lost, since I didnt pay
to the boat-man, since Necropolis is place...

no one's there, windows closed
noose, rope and hanged man smile's
no butter fly's just old man
He knows, I can seem I can see
But what can I do now?
Its to late
since I am sailing in river
what has no end, amd beggining
has no shores, as you mortals can see
whyle you're alive



Equalizing the score
whit heathen gods
and trying catch undying sunlight
whit blind eyes
blinded from sins of mortals
as ships start to sink
we all fade in afterlife
and what decide to wander
those will stay and wander
in crimson wasteland
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Karlabos
<insert title>

Posts: 1555

Age: 26
From: Brazil

  08.02.2014 at 19:42
"You will never be considered wise
if you aren't able to understand another human"
I feel I'm falling in ignorance.
The more I know about philosophies, the universe, the truth, everything
The less I seem to understand the others...
The less I seem to understand myself...
The less knowledge I seem to achieve.

"You will never be able to protect anyone
if you aren't prepared to be a hero"
I feel I'm falling in unsecurity.
How can I even be a hero? Do I even have a kind of superpower?
I can read my own mind...
I can travel in time. Linearly...
I can foresee the present...
I just have the same powers as everyone else.

"Every person has potential to be special
if you give the right definition of special"
I feel I'm falling in a paradox.
Did you know that every single person on earth is far better than you
in at least something?
If everyone is better than the others, aren't everyone equal?
If everyone is special doesn't that mean that no one is?
If everyone is equal then why do everyone act like they are the choosen one?

"There's no way a person can understand his purpose
if he keeps trying to understand it"
I feel feckless.
Haven't we been chasing the answer for our existence as a society since ever
and haven't we gathered more and more information, in order to find happiness?
If one can't understand himself alone, he'll ask for a partner
If two can't understand themselves as a couple, they'll build a society
If a society can't decide anything as a whole, everyone will remain unhappy.
We can't be happy if we live trying to.
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ANGEL REAPER

Posts: 3110

Age: 23
From: Serbia

  11.03.2014 at 23:05
The hills are my wounds
The snow are my eyes
The Wind is my breath
The crows are my cries

In the thress and streams
In the sparrows and bees
Even in snakes,my dreams live

When in ground my body sleeps
My spirit burns within thee
Lost world of my kind
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"Cross is only an iron,hope is just an illusion,freedom is nothing but a name..."
"Build your walls of the dead stone...Build your roofs of a dead wood..Build your dreams of a dead thoughts"
Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  14.03.2014 at 20:02
Howls near gallows, calls my name, and I can see pocket size sun
Under the oath and cripted, what needs to be done to die?
Sorrowful angels, road to desolation and it cant be the destination
Dark road, I ride, and roam in eternity's fields whit out knowing why
Am I dead, I am I alive, and what is difference?
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  01.04.2014 at 20:09
I pity my sadness while mortals watch the day
mortals do opposite as I do, I cant see anymore
those shades , it makes me see different
redemption , truth and I dont feel anything
memories are same as always
time pass by in my room
windows closed, same old air , air of the death
all is same, all I know dont remeber my name
visions and dreams,. I cant left behind
i can left this place either
all I do is pity my sadness, while mortals watch the day
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  03.06.2014 at 15:16
The Reaper

Chaos passing - its time to meet a reaper
reaper from the gray castle, in entombed graveyard
where chaotic voices screaming my name
and the reaper, reaper is out
hunting high and low again
and I am searching into depts, I am searching light
burning candle, evil winds cant stop
paradise, I am kneeling in front of you
women, or just reflection in the depts
where shadows talk , no way to run and hide
no where to live, in land
where reaper is out and chaos passing buy
in the reaper town,
town what is my home and I stand tall
reaper can kill me, I am not afraid
reaper die ...and chaos passing by forever











I burned my tower, of evil
and left all behind
the wind and she can lick my bitter tears

the bridge, I cant decide to burn it or not
when I am crossing over
this river of memories and hollowed dreams
Just died once , dont know when it will happen for real

I saw an enslaved idol of mine
pale as me when I wonder
i have no home, just place to be
I have no friends, just holwing moon
I have no family, just spirit what wonders
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  20.06.2014 at 01:37
What the sun will forget to rise tomorrow?

What the sun will forget to rise tomorrow?
Can our children fin the way
and can there be food for all us to eat?

What if the sun will forget to rise tomorrow?
Can there be warm safe place called home
where loved arms waiting for a hug?

What if the sun will forget to rise tomorrow?
Can wind demon destroy again?
and overflowed wallyes take our life's?





Essence of denying

essence of denying love
is made of solitude
and life became so hard
when daylight lingers no more
and portals of darkness closing in

essence of denying close ones
dont charge you no penny
just takes it one by one
and what I supose to do?
if I never have seen anything else

essence of denying life
when nothinmg left to blame
time stands still, sadness never fades
just illusion, and melancholical dreams
in wooden bad

What if the sun will forget to rise tomorrow?
hate and anger wakes up hate
forgotten in many centuries?

What if the sun will forget to rise tomorrow?
and we forgot to feed out children
can there be another new day sometimes in the future?




I am going to cross the fields --- forever
where eternity awaits in crimson wastelands
shore of gray light flashing before
so beautiful, I want to leave faster
as invisible man I am roaming
between places and dreams
just cant cope anymore
I need shivering light
of those fields where I will be
rest of eternity
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Karlabos
<insert title>

Posts: 1555

Age: 26
From: Brazil

  12.07.2014 at 00:37
Far, the hunter awaits inert
aiming his gun at the yeti
The bullets hit him and hurt
like the hunter just threw confetti
the man's expression is of scare
The giant gives him a death stare
The hunter's eyes, filled with tears
The monster's wax, filled with ears
Its strength cannot be highlighted enough
Twice as tall as the average man
Stomps the chest and shows what it's made of
He is the abominable snowman
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Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  12.07.2014 at 21:31
Life is to long
but I cant decide, what to do
just hanging on or open those gates
unknown reality, and rest just fades away
cant decide it cant understand
time just seems stoping all , eternal suffering
waiting to be free
life is to long
cant go just now, cant see the difference
cant feel and understand
there no logic here today
and all is ripped apart
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing
Bad English
nobody

Posts: 37939

Age: 29
From: Sweden

  03.08.2014 at 15:50
Her Crimson Tears

In the land of the wicked moon, under wolfs howls
where water dogs will run , juts near by wasteland
on hollow ground of wasted souls
her tears creeps out every warrior
sword forged in fire and ice
made to cut flash n bones of our enemy
her tears, under crimson moon
her tears protected by wicked spell
a new born child was born
whit her crimson tears
fool moon saga and new eclipse
can end a new chapter until its written...
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Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

Stormtroopers of Death - ''Speak English or Die''

I better die, because I never will learn speek english, so I choose dieing

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