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Posted by Soliloquy on 17.05.2006 at 03:24
since MS started all overagain, i decidied to get rid of the numbers. but i believe this should have been the 5th poetry thread.

anyways, you guys know the rules. post somethig you wrote, or a friend of yours wrote. or if you dont want to post some poem, you can always read others work and comment on that. unlike the last poetry thread, lets try to comment on every poem we get in.

(if you want me to add or remove something, just PM me, and i'll edit it right away.)

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  12.01.2016 at 17:55
We admire the sun, in landscapes we mourn
Cold rivers between us, and frustration between our love
Gray clouds, brought here by solitary wind
And distance between pale moon and bright sun is just an illusion
We told our last goodbyes to world we once knew
As members of anti-summer alliance , between October and March
People won't understand, this passion about ice and snow
As members of anti-winter alliance, between March and October
People won't understand our passion about sun, what never sets here
Sleepy hallows and doorways what you don't need to lock
Empty wounds between us, there is no going back
Falling rain pounding on your side, you're wasted from mud and depression
Just a frozen river here, quiet place, I can walk and be free
Mighty sun , moon, we admire you in old ways
Just an illusion, growing means freedom; I am refusing to do it
We admire the landscapes, where we walk, and will forever dwell
Life is to short for LOVE, there is many great things to do online !!!

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